20/9/10 We are learning to put it all together.

My plan:

Dad,light,counting,hearing,can't go to sleep,will the trees come down on us?,wind,rain,not dark,full moon,just the top of the trees moving which makes it look like the trees are going to come down on us.

BLUE means i changed the word.

My story:

DAD whats that? WHAT? that bright light look at the window look theres that bright light again ohh yer! it must be lighting and thunder, but... wheres the noise? i'll go and pill the curtains so we can see it. The thunder must be a long way away. When the next light comes im going to count says dad and calvin 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 12 13 look the light went again im going to count again on the next light 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 whats that noise? its thunder its 14km away from us. We are not going to get to sleep now the wind is blow wing the rain goes hard out and then it stops and then it goes again dad are the trees going to blow over? no its just the tops of the trees that are blow wing.

W.A.L.T:Make tired writting come to life

My puppets name is Tandy and shes a cazzy fur brain girl and shes really afad , Tandy loves mushed up leafs she will do anything to get them or fur balls and hants ice cream and chocolate but.. thats her friends favorite.

My free writting 13/9/10

tip-tip-tip-tipattip

Tc is looking at me im sitting next to Emma all i can hear is her tiping Natalya grab the net-book next to me its Nat b-day party after school i gave my preends to Nat i got her a smig voucher with 25$ on it and a big bag of M'Ms i hope she likes it well she all reddy looked to see what i gave her most pepeol got her a smigle voucher emma is going tip tip tip tip tip kate always writes something like hi hi hi hi hi hi hi

My free writting 2/9/10

i don t know whatto write about emma emma shes a long long way from me and i can hear her type wow emma types loundley britt t.c is typeing and looking at me wowshes a good typer alan hes got one of the I TOCE COMPERS at frist i thorght that it was going to be just a sken but its this black thing i think might take my hari out and do it again but t.c will say no because get back to typeing causemwe don t have a lot of time kates just wrtiting and writing about that anne frank book that her reading group has to read i would not want want to read that i like to read horse books.