Sunday, September 19, 2010

20/9/10 We are learning to put it all together.

My plan:

Dad,light,counting,hearing,can't go to sleep,will the trees come down on us?,wind,rain,not dark,full moon,just the top of the trees moving which makes it look like the trees are going to come down on us.

BLUE means i changed the word.

My story:

DAD whats that? WHAT? that bright light look at the window look theres that bright light again ohh yer! it must be lighting and thunder, but... wheres the noise? i'll go and pill the curtains so we can see it. The thunder must be a long way away. When the next light comes im going to count says dad and calvin 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 12 13 look the light went again im going to count again on the next light 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 whats that noise? its thunder its 14km away from us. We are not going to get to sleep now the wind is blow wing the rain goes hard out and then it stops and then it goes again dad are the trees going to blow over? no its just the tops of the trees that are blow wing.

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